Saturday, May 26, 2012

                                                       Faith  by Laura  D  Hintz
                                            there is  one   hope   one   dream      
                                             one  Jesus  Christ    one   heaven 
                                              one   devil  one  hell  
                                               what  do  you believe in   the  devil  or  Jesus  Christ
                                                
                                                    

well  that  was   a  poem    that  i  wrote   I  am  not  very   good  at  writing                                                       poem   but     if    you   would   like  to comment   I like comments   of
                                                       what   you  thick  I  could  work  on  thank    Laura

1 comment:

  1. It's lovely! I enjoy poetry too, but I haven't done it lately!

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